Ignite Presentation
WWW: I like your idea for the dynamic with the characters. EBI: Timings of presentation but great presentation none the less. WWW: Good concept sounds interesting. EBI: Try to apply more media theories throughout. WWW: Alot if information in a short amount of time. EBI: Practise timings better for changes don't make narrative that obvious. I believe that the concept of my movie and the realistic narrative was a a point that people really liked just the execution must be good to have a clear narrative in a two minute trailer, I do believe that by saying too much for some slides I ended up speaking to fast and saying future points that made one of my slides completely irrelevant therefore giving everyone the impression of not revising.